[ he'd happened to see her earlier carrying a bunch of logs. Good, he'd thought! More firewood! They're going to need a lot of it, because who knows how long they're staying out here for? He's not sure if it's better or worse than being stuck in the city, really, but it at least feels like progress.
Unlike Athena's structure, which is showing little progress. His ears twitch in concern, and he tilts his head. ]
... While your idea is noble, perhaps trying to create a simpler structure would be better?
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[ he'd happened to see her earlier carrying a bunch of logs. Good, he'd thought! More firewood! They're going to need a lot of it, because who knows how long they're staying out here for? He's not sure if it's better or worse than being stuck in the city, really, but it at least feels like progress.
Unlike Athena's structure, which is showing little progress. His ears twitch in concern, and he tilts his head. ]
... While your idea is noble, perhaps trying to create a simpler structure would be better?