[Hikari had stopped the twirling just in time to catch Takeru aim and release the arrow. However, she never followed it enough to notice that it just barely fell short of the intended target because her eyes were once more firmly fixed on Takeru. She looked...concerned.]
[Before she could say anything, however, Tailmon--who had also been watching the young boy's form out of curiosity--spoke up:]
You're not holding the front of the bow steady. When you release, if the bow moves at all, it'll take a lot of the speed and power out of the arrow.
[She, of course, only saw the flaws in the technique. Hikari, on the other hand, realized what was causing them:]
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[Before she could say anything, however, Tailmon--who had also been watching the young boy's form out of curiosity--spoke up:]
You're not holding the front of the bow steady. When you release, if the bow moves at all, it'll take a lot of the speed and power out of the arrow.
[She, of course, only saw the flaws in the technique. Hikari, on the other hand, realized what was causing them:]
You're hurt.